CornerStoned's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Same Old Hero Story]

NICE!

Really good drawings, animation was a little bit skipped on though, they just sort of moved their feet a tad bit and slid around. You might want to change that in the future. Pretty good sounds, and I liked the uniqueness in that it was steriotypical. That sounds like an oxymoron, but it is true, and I liked it! The part with the duck hunt paradoy was the best! I LOVE THAT GAME! I also like the little fort that looks like the ones on the ORIGINAL mario from like 1984 with the fireworks and all, man that brought back memories! I look forward to helping you next flash pass judgement. (It probably wont need my help though!) One thing though, I noticed that you used the same music from a flash made by a friend of mine (the part where he walks into the castle) and the punching sound effect is also from the same person. I am curious is you know SeedyKay and got the sounds from him, or out of coincidence you used the same stuff and I was overly observent enough to notice. Just curious and I'd like to know!

Sir-Eatsalot responds:

Nope! I have no idea who that guy is, sorry. But I have done an animation where I redrew the guys feet where it was fluid, but that animation was pretty pointless. Other than that, thanks!

[Mechassault]

Kick ass!

That was friggin' sweet man! Great drawings and animation, although some background while the mech walks down the street would have been nice. Sound was great, you must have a good set of sound FX. But, some background music could have always been a plus. I like the part with the guy with the assault rifle, LOL! Make more like this, maybe even a small scale battle with other mechs or something. Well, take a very well earned 5 and THANK YOU for the protection point!

[tastes like chicken]

Hey!

Well, hello again. Complete coincidence seing one of your flashes under judgement, and let me tell you what I think. I LIKE IT! Excellent point and pretty friggin funny too! Some day, just some day, I know that guy is going to get himself or someone else killed. He actually has protection on the show, guys who follow him with high powered rifles and stuff like that, they just don't show them because it would take away from his supposed "daredevil" image. Nice flash and keep this up, I like it WAY better than most the stuff that comes through the portal and it felt really good to laugh for once. A few fast tips.
1. Nice drawings, keep that the same, maybe add some more movement to the characters like breathing etc...
2. Make it a little louder, I had to crank my speakers, even though there is subtitles in there, I think hearing is better than reading.
3. Pretty good accent, it made me chuckle a bit.
Lastly, can't wait for the next one and you response. Keep it up with THESE kind of flashes, I think that is where your best talent is!

TheOtherTruth responds:

Thank you for your review.

An equal coincidence that I even made a flash! I have been working so many hours that I really don't have the time to do it anymore.

Now if I get just get you to like those Bush Bash movies.... ;)

Anyway, you are more likely to see this shorter style movie from me (and maybe even an occassional clock movie) because it takes much less time to make them.

The volume actually came trough fairly well on my end, but I will investigate it.

Good to see you back and I am glad that you liked this one.

[Powerup Stick]

Nice trailer.

I have a few suggestions though. Add sound to the real thing, and make the animation more fluid, it was pretty jerky. Also, put in some background music. I can't wait to see the full movie and I know I will be proud to help that one pass judgement too!

NoshuClock responds:

Thank you. sorry it took so long to reply >_<

[Ultimate Power]

Room for improvement

1. Try to make animation more fluid, they are completely still half of the time. 2. Fix grammer errors in their speech. 3. Add more sound, and possibly a little background music to complement the situation. 4. MAKE MORE! I like this a fair amount and I am happy to help it pass judgement. Since I know you are still in your early stages, I know that only better things will come from you and I can't wait to see them! Keep it up and keep em' comin'!

[innocent eyes]

Not bad!

Not bad at all! I can only give you 3 areas for improvement. 1. Draw a little better, the lines were all squigely, but it does add to the style =). 2. Touch up on the animation a TAD bit, there were only few places that seemed bad. 3. In my opinion, use a different song next time, soory, it's just not my type of music. Other than these pretty much insignifigant things, I think you did a good job. Congratulations of keeping the file size down as well. Very good, especially for doing it from boredom!

[Dog Chat]

Well done

Hilarious! LOL! Vennie from New yo Canada! Friggin' awesome! Only thing I can say is improve animation, but there isn't a whole lot to animate in this kind of film. Keep this up and I'll have a new favorite author to add!