At least we agree on one thing...
KILL THE PUBE MUPPET! God, I HATE that thing! Well, I'm back. Nice job, I have very few bad things to say about this flash, it is almost entirely good.
1. Strawberry clock looked a little dark to me, I thought he was supposed to be really bright red.
2. I have no idea who the dead strawberry thing was, I guess I've been a little lax in portal voting the past few weeks.
3. You didn't kill the pube muppet DEAD ENOUGH! LOL!
Only a little lack of drawing and animation holds this flash back, but you are improving and the fact that it was funny overides almost all the bad things. Nice job, I wish I could have helped it pass judgement, but O well.
P.S. One of your reviewers made a comment on my Arnold joke. I DO (and did) know that he can't be president until we amend the Constitution (which I think we should), the point was that it was supposed to be interesting and maybe even comical. Sorry, but when that guy called me an idiot is really pissed me off seing as how all he knows about me is about a paragraph or too of text. Back to the subject, good job and I'm glad to see the normal movie to Bush Bash movie ratio tilt in favor of the norm. Well done and I can't wait for more. I await your response, and have a good Saint Valentines Day!
P.S. How did your court case go?
Thank you for your review.
Strawberry Compass is from the movie "True North", which you should definately watch. That movie won Buku awards.
I think that you might be too hung up on Strawberry's color. He used a "Loofah" before filming and his husk had a clean, natural sheen for this film!
I think the Arnold thing was probably just a mis-read on his part.
And,of course, the Bush Bash stuff....well, I have probably said it all (until his next screw up).
I do see some potential for another one of those annoying presidential dictionaries.....but you never know. ;)
I never saw the movie but now I sure as Hell want to! The music was friggin' awesome, that made it all the better. I wish I could just let the movie play all the time so I could browse NG and it wouldn't stop. You wanna know a messed up coincidence, me and you got the same name. Not much of a coincidence really, I share it with friggin' 4 other people. Someone says "Brandon", and you will hear "What?" said 5 times all at once. Gets pretty irritating. Well, not a bad flash and keep em' comin'!
thanks Brandon. u seem like one cool dude. we should meet in person sometime this lifetime here on earth. good will and God bless you
Really good drawings, animation was a little bit skipped on though, they just sort of moved their feet a tad bit and slid around. You might want to change that in the future. Pretty good sounds, and I liked the uniqueness in that it was steriotypical. That sounds like an oxymoron, but it is true, and I liked it! The part with the duck hunt paradoy was the best! I LOVE THAT GAME! I also like the little fort that looks like the ones on the ORIGINAL mario from like 1984 with the fireworks and all, man that brought back memories! I look forward to helping you next flash pass judgement. (It probably wont need my help though!) One thing though, I noticed that you used the same music from a flash made by a friend of mine (the part where he walks into the castle) and the punching sound effect is also from the same person. I am curious is you know SeedyKay and got the sounds from him, or out of coincidence you used the same stuff and I was overly observent enough to notice. Just curious and I'd like to know!
Nope! I have no idea who that guy is, sorry. But I have done an animation where I redrew the guys feet where it was fluid, but that animation was pretty pointless. Other than that, thanks!
That was friggin' sweet man! Great drawings and animation, although some background while the mech walks down the street would have been nice. Sound was great, you must have a good set of sound FX. But, some background music could have always been a plus. I like the part with the guy with the assault rifle, LOL! Make more like this, maybe even a small scale battle with other mechs or something. Well, take a very well earned 5 and THANK YOU for the protection point!
Well, hello again. Complete coincidence seing one of your flashes under judgement, and let me tell you what I think. I LIKE IT! Excellent point and pretty friggin funny too! Some day, just some day, I know that guy is going to get himself or someone else killed. He actually has protection on the show, guys who follow him with high powered rifles and stuff like that, they just don't show them because it would take away from his supposed "daredevil" image. Nice flash and keep this up, I like it WAY better than most the stuff that comes through the portal and it felt really good to laugh for once. A few fast tips.
1. Nice drawings, keep that the same, maybe add some more movement to the characters like breathing etc...
2. Make it a little louder, I had to crank my speakers, even though there is subtitles in there, I think hearing is better than reading.
3. Pretty good accent, it made me chuckle a bit.
Lastly, can't wait for the next one and you response. Keep it up with THESE kind of flashes, I think that is where your best talent is!
An equal coincidence that I even made a flash! I have been working so many hours that I really don't have the time to do it anymore.
Now if I get just get you to like those Bush Bash movies.... ;)
Anyway, you are more likely to see this shorter style movie from me (and maybe even an occassional clock movie) because it takes much less time to make them.
The volume actually came trough fairly well on my end, but I will investigate it.
Good to see you back and I am glad that you liked this one.
I have a few suggestions though. Add sound to the real thing, and make the animation more fluid, it was pretty jerky. Also, put in some background music. I can't wait to see the full movie and I know I will be proud to help that one pass judgement too!
Thank you. sorry it took so long to reply >_<
A NG INJUSTICE!
How the hell does THIS get turd of the week? It wasn't very good, but it does NOT deserve this award, thats for damn sure! First of all, a lot of effort is evident in this flash, so it is not lack of trying. Second, DRAW BETTER. I think that is what killed you. Third, add sound effects and try to cut down on the file size, use reduced size MP3 files. Fourth, good job on all the different angles that everything appeared from, I thought that was pretty cool. Lastly, if you insist on using stick figures, at least make them distinctive. Put something into your stick figures that makes them different from everybody else's so it doesnt seem like an BLAM point right off the bat, most people vote on first impressions. Too bad about your undeserved award, I hope you have better luck next time!
Room for improvement
1. Try to make animation more fluid, they are completely still half of the time. 2. Fix grammer errors in their speech. 3. Add more sound, and possibly a little background music to complement the situation. 4. MAKE MORE! I like this a fair amount and I am happy to help it pass judgement. Since I know you are still in your early stages, I know that only better things will come from you and I can't wait to see them! Keep it up and keep em' comin'!
Not bad at all! I can only give you 3 areas for improvement. 1. Draw a little better, the lines were all squigely, but it does add to the style =). 2. Touch up on the animation a TAD bit, there were only few places that seemed bad. 3. In my opinion, use a different song next time, soory, it's just not my type of music. Other than these pretty much insignifigant things, I think you did a good job. Congratulations of keeping the file size down as well. Very good, especially for doing it from boredom!
Hilarious! LOL! Vennie from New yo Canada! Friggin' awesome! Only thing I can say is improve animation, but there isn't a whole lot to animate in this kind of film. Keep this up and I'll have a new favorite author to add!
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